Have you ever had 11 days of holiday for a quarter break? If yes, what did you do? Have you ever thought of your homework in the holiday? Well, my school is probably one of the schools that have a long holiday. Though I didn't really do anything I didn't go anywhere either. Just busy enjoying my time at home. Oh, guess what? My teacher gave my classmates and I a lot of homework. It kept me busy while I'm bored. Now let's hear more of it!
On my holiday, I didn't go anywhere because my parents were really busy to go somewhere else. So I just stayed at home doing my homework and watching my television. It was sort of boring because I can't play with anyone. Not even my brother, because he had his friends coming over. Though I'm very glad that my parents had holiday for the first 4 days.
They had holidays because it was Good Friday. I was really happy that day. I remember I smiled a lot. At noon, my dad and I played badminton in my backyard. We really had fun playing. So after the big cheering in Good Friday, it was EASTER! My family celebrated that Jesus had risen from the dead for us. I'm really thankful for that.
So after Sunday when Easter ends, it was Monday that my dad and my mom had to to the office. So I had nothing to do but did my homework or watched the television or read a book. Though I didn't read a lot of books because I don't really like to read books in holidays. So this holiday was really boring.
The next week, which is on Saturday, I went to Kidzania with my friends. They were Jennifer, Ristia, Shila, me and Jennifer's cousin. We went to Kidzania for a special occasion. It was Jennifer's birthday! We had a lot of fun there. Though it was sort of full that we only got to play 3 games. The best part was when we were in the Acting Academy. The play was about Peter Pan. Me and my friends were the lost girls while Jennifer's cousin was Tinkerbell.
After we did the drama, all of us had to say good-bye. I really wanted to stay there and play more together but my mom probably won't let me. So after that day was Sunday. I went to the mall with my mom, my brother and my brother's friend. We had lunch there. I had pizza while the others had rice. I couldn't finish my pizza, so I shared it. I t was an incredible pizza. After we all had lunch, my mom took me to his place where no one could know about it. I like it there so much, I wish I could go there some more time.
On Monday, first day of school, my classmates shared their holiday. Ibu Hana really enjoyed them. she said "It's very wonderful", "That's very nice", " WOW!". She's very positive, that's what I really like about her. So I'm hoping you would enjoy this, too. I wish that I could hear yours sometime.





7 comments:
Well done Alizka! Your writing is interesting because you use a lot of adjectives and you invite people to read on by asking the reader questions. Remember that communication is not only about words but also about pictures and multimedia. Next time include a picture OK. 9/10
Wow! It's very good and interesting! I like it so much!
Al, you wrote an interesting story! It's wonderful!
Hi Alizka, it's Mandy. I think that what you have wrote is very descriptive. I just think that you have to watch for little mistakes.
Hi Alizka, It's Michelle T. Your post was really good!
Well Done!
Hi Alizka, it's Michelle T! Good posting, One thing is that ''it'' it is not with a space between it. your was like this '' I t''.
Well Done!
Hi, Alizka I think your holiday was very interesting. I agree with Mrs Jane.
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